utopia: from Gk. ou “not” + topos “place.”*

An Ideal State

to feel your heart-
beat ripple
across both
our bodies
as the moon-
light ripples
through the leaves

to smell your breath
and have you
wrap your arms
like a mantle
across my shoulders

to have our
sweat mingle
in rivulets
and our bodies blaze
like candles flames’
for one last light


For more poetry which may or may not be about “no place,” head on over to be present, be here, where Liz is hosting the last formally organized Poetry Thursday Traveling Poetry Show.*utopia. Dictionary.com. Online Etymology Dictionary. Douglas Harper, Historian. http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/utopia (accessed: October 03, 2007).
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