Comments on: read write word #1: Laughing in the Wind http://fallenverses.org/2008/10/17/read-write-word-1-laughing-in-the-wind/ Wed, 28 Oct 2009 23:53:50 +0000 hourly 1 By: tom http://fallenverses.org/2008/10/17/read-write-word-1-laughing-in-the-wind/comment-page-1/#comment-15160 tom Wed, 22 Oct 2008 18:10:18 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=411#comment-15160 Thanks Christine! The site will need some tweaking over time but I think I like this one more than the last. I sometimes think the best poems I write start with someone else's words, either by directly inspiring, or by inspiring connections I wouldn't initially see. Thanks Christine!
The site will need some tweaking over time but I think I like this one more than the last.

I sometimes think the best poems I write start with someone else’s words, either by directly inspiring, or by inspiring connections I wouldn’t initially see.

]]> By: christine http://fallenverses.org/2008/10/17/read-write-word-1-laughing-in-the-wind/comment-page-1/#comment-15159 christine Wed, 22 Oct 2008 18:04:39 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=411#comment-15159 Tom, I really like the new look of your site. And your poem is integral, flowing, and tender. It's hard to believe you wrote this from a wordie prompt. I like how the wind is the central image, combined with love, invisible, yet felt. <abbr><em><em>christine´s last blog post: <a href="http://www.balancedontheedge.org/2008/10/22/everything-is-a-sign/" rel="nofollow">everything is a sign</a></em></abbr></em> Tom, I really like the new look of your site.

And your poem is integral, flowing, and tender. It’s hard to believe you wrote this from a wordie prompt. I like how the wind is the central image, combined with love, invisible, yet felt.

christine´s last blog post: everything is a sign

]]> By: tom http://fallenverses.org/2008/10/17/read-write-word-1-laughing-in-the-wind/comment-page-1/#comment-15090 tom Mon, 20 Oct 2008 03:00:35 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=411#comment-15090 Thanks to the both of you! Thanks to the both of you!

]]> By: Sweet Talking Guy.. http://fallenverses.org/2008/10/17/read-write-word-1-laughing-in-the-wind/comment-page-1/#comment-15057 Sweet Talking Guy.. Sun, 19 Oct 2008 00:46:08 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=411#comment-15057 A fascinating look at the wind! A fascinating look at the wind!

]]> By: Linda Jacobs http://fallenverses.org/2008/10/17/read-write-word-1-laughing-in-the-wind/comment-page-1/#comment-15038 Linda Jacobs Sat, 18 Oct 2008 12:45:27 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=411#comment-15038 Oh, that ending is amazing! I love how you link the ideas of the wind and love together! Oh, that ending is amazing! I love how you link the ideas of the wind and love together!

]]> By: tom http://fallenverses.org/2008/10/17/read-write-word-1-laughing-in-the-wind/comment-page-1/#comment-15019 tom Fri, 17 Oct 2008 20:41:57 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=411#comment-15019 Thanks Rob. Though, "little gem"... hm... feels kinda girly to me... meh, who cares =P Thanks Rob.

Though, “little gem”… hm… feels kinda girly to me… meh, who cares =P

]]> By: rob kistner http://fallenverses.org/2008/10/17/read-write-word-1-laughing-in-the-wind/comment-page-1/#comment-15018 rob kistner Fri, 17 Oct 2008 20:16:02 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=411#comment-15018 A little gem of a piece... truly enjoyed it. "There is velocity when falling, even when falling in love" just knocked me out! A little gem of a piece… truly enjoyed it. “There is velocity when falling, even when falling in love” just knocked me out!

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