Comments on: Read Write Poem #43:On the joys of sharing a dorm room http://fallenverses.org/2008/09/08/read-write-poem-43on-the-joys-of-sharing-a-dorm-room/ Wed, 07 Jan 2009 17:22:02 +0000 hourly 1 By: tom http://fallenverses.org/2008/09/08/read-write-poem-43on-the-joys-of-sharing-a-dorm-room/comment-page-1/#comment-13975 tom Thu, 11 Sep 2008 02:34:26 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=329#comment-13975 Thanks, everyone, for taking the time to read and/or comment here. It is appreciated. The beer line went through several revisions, so I'm glad people enjoy it. It's interesting, to me, the creative process. Half-finishing a line, deleting, rewriting, etc. until the line is finished (for the moment) and ushered out to the world. I don't know how anyone else writes, or for that matter how I write. Is that normal, to pick apart each line as you go? Or do most people wait until the whole poem is written? Thanks, everyone, for taking the time to read and/or comment here. It is appreciated.
The beer line went through several revisions, so I’m glad people enjoy it. It’s interesting, to me, the creative process. Half-finishing a line, deleting, rewriting, etc. until the line is finished (for the moment) and ushered out to the world. I don’t know how anyone else writes, or for that matter how I write. Is that normal, to pick apart each line as you go? Or do most people wait until the whole poem is written?

]]> By: carolee http://fallenverses.org/2008/09/08/read-write-poem-43on-the-joys-of-sharing-a-dorm-room/comment-page-1/#comment-13943 carolee Tue, 09 Sep 2008 13:35:59 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=329#comment-13943 what a great place to take this prompt!!! very creative. <em>carolee's last blog post: <a href="http://polkadotwitch.wordpress.com/2008/09/06/is-poetry-ruining-your-social-life/" rel="nofollow">is poetry ruining your social life?</a> from http://www.polkadotwitch.wordpress.com</em> what a great place to take this prompt!!! very creative.

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]]> By: susan http://fallenverses.org/2008/09/08/read-write-poem-43on-the-joys-of-sharing-a-dorm-room/comment-page-1/#comment-13933 susan Tue, 09 Sep 2008 01:12:23 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=329#comment-13933 Like others, the beer line is spot on. It encapsulates the scene perfectly. This is has the greatest impact. Like others, the beer line is spot on. It encapsulates the scene perfectly. This is has the greatest impact.

]]> By: christine http://fallenverses.org/2008/09/08/read-write-poem-43on-the-joys-of-sharing-a-dorm-room/comment-page-1/#comment-13932 christine Mon, 08 Sep 2008 23:41:37 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=329#comment-13932 My favorite line is "the smell of beer, cigarettes, and latex, but the whole poem is spot on. I understand the need for a disclaimer, I wrote one too, although I try not to confuse the artist with the art. :-) <em>christine's last blog post: <a href="http://mariacristinapoesia.com/2008/09/07/we-walk/" rel="nofollow">We walk</a> from http://mariacristinapoesia.com</em> My favorite line is “the smell of beer, cigarettes, and latex, but the whole poem is spot on. I understand the need for a disclaimer, I wrote one too, although I try not to confuse the artist with the art. :-)

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]]> By: Lirone http://fallenverses.org/2008/09/08/read-write-poem-43on-the-joys-of-sharing-a-dorm-room/comment-page-1/#comment-13931 Lirone Mon, 08 Sep 2008 21:01:30 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=329#comment-13931 Beautifully compact evocation! <em>Lirone's last blog post: <a href="http://wordsthatsing.wordpress.com/2008/09/07/song_of_fragility/" rel="nofollow">Song of fragility</a> from www.wordsthatsing.wordpress.com</em> Beautifully compact evocation!

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]]> By: Nathan http://fallenverses.org/2008/09/08/read-write-poem-43on-the-joys-of-sharing-a-dorm-room/comment-page-1/#comment-13929 Nathan Mon, 08 Sep 2008 19:50:42 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=329#comment-13929 "The fragrance of beer, / cigarettes and latex." I love when a poet can get the whole world in a line or two. Well done. <em>Nathan's last blog post: <a href="http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2008/09/08/the-stars/" rel="nofollow">The Stars</a> from http://disorder1313.wordpress.com</em> “The fragrance of beer, / cigarettes and latex.” I love when a poet can get the whole world in a line or two. Well done.

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