Comments on: Read Write Poem #42: Sign in or Register http://fallenverses.org/2008/09/01/read-write-poem-42-sign-in-or-register/ Wed, 07 Jan 2009 23:14:01 +0000 hourly 1 By: one more believer http://fallenverses.org/2008/09/01/read-write-poem-42-sign-in-or-register/comment-page-1/#comment-13819 one more believer Wed, 03 Sep 2008 23:43:46 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=314#comment-13819 "...as alterable as wikepedia.."... i'm speechless as a black and white flat screen... to explain or not to explain, in agreement... it is a struggle i struggle to explain... <em>one more believer's last blog post: <a href="http://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2008/09/03/hope-and-a-half/" rel="nofollow">hope and a half</a> from http://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/</em> “…as alterable as wikepedia..”… i’m speechless as a black and white flat screen… to explain or not to explain, in agreement… it is a struggle i struggle to explain…

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]]> By: Nathan http://fallenverses.org/2008/09/01/read-write-poem-42-sign-in-or-register/comment-page-1/#comment-13745 Nathan Tue, 02 Sep 2008 13:29:20 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/?p=314#comment-13745 Wonderful metaphor here. Great work isolating the third stanza as a sentence -- nice rhythm. And the last sentence would be a worthy motto. <em>Nathan's last blog post: <a href="http://disorder1313.wordpress.com/2008/09/01/photo-factory/" rel="nofollow">Photo Factory</a> from http://disorder1313.wordpress.com</em> Wonderful metaphor here. Great work isolating the third stanza as a sentence — nice rhythm. And the last sentence would be a worthy motto.

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