http://fallenverses.org/2007/12/27/shes-a-good-witch/ Wed, 07 Jan 2009 18:58:13 +0000 hourly 1 http://fallenverses.org/2007/12/27/shes-a-good-witch/comment-page-1/#comment-329 carolee Thu, 27 Dec 2007 20:44:15 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/2007/12/27/shes-a-good-witch/#comment-329 a good witch? wait 'til you get to know me. :) i had fun with the original piece and with the found poem. i really like the last stanza of yours! "look past revel and hold each other." it IS a gem. (without the sarcastic quotation marks.) a good witch? wait ’til you get to know me. :) i had fun with the original piece and with the found poem. i really like the last stanza of yours! “look past revel and hold each other.” it IS a gem. (without the sarcastic quotation marks.)

]]> http://fallenverses.org/2007/12/27/shes-a-good-witch/comment-page-1/#comment-328 Linda Jacobs Thu, 27 Dec 2007 19:54:54 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/2007/12/27/shes-a-good-witch/#comment-328 This is beautiful poetry! Both of them, actually. The first is jam-packed with images while the second leaves more to the imagination. But they both get to where they are supposed to. I really admire the seamless transitions between stanzas in the first. Excellent collaboration (even if you don't like the word!). This is beautiful poetry! Both of them, actually. The first is jam-packed with images while the second leaves more to the imagination. But they both get to where they are supposed to. I really admire the seamless transitions between stanzas in the first. Excellent collaboration (even if you don’t like the word!).

]]> http://fallenverses.org/2007/12/27/shes-a-good-witch/comment-page-1/#comment-325 whypaisley Thu, 27 Dec 2007 12:08:44 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/2007/12/27/shes-a-good-witch/#comment-325 this turned out really well,,, as if it was meant to be,, in both versions i must add... i was unsure of this exercise,, and i have a partner,, and we both wrote something,, i just cant seem to have enough contact with him to get it put together... hopefully before the deadline he will email me back..... this turned out really well,,, as if it was meant to be,, in both versions i must add… i was unsure of this exercise,, and i have a partner,, and we both wrote something,, i just cant seem to have enough contact with him to get it put together… hopefully before the deadline he will email me back…..

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