Comments on: Read Write Poem #2: My Green Fairy http://fallenverses.org/2007/11/28/read-write-poem-2-food-of-sorts/ Wed, 07 Jan 2009 20:37:24 +0000 hourly 1 By: Ceridwen http://fallenverses.org/2007/11/28/read-write-poem-2-food-of-sorts/comment-page-1/#comment-274 Ceridwen Fri, 30 Nov 2007 15:56:14 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/2007/11/28/read-write-poem-2-food-of-sorts/#comment-274 "Not even my ego makes up the difference." That's a fantastic line. It's surprising to me in the context of the poem, and I love lines that surprise but make perfect sense once you've read them. “Not even my ego makes up the difference.”

That’s a fantastic line. It’s surprising to me in the context of the poem, and I love lines that surprise but make perfect sense once you’ve read them.

]]> By: Sara http://fallenverses.org/2007/11/28/read-write-poem-2-food-of-sorts/comment-page-1/#comment-272 Sara Thu, 29 Nov 2007 23:34:13 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/2007/11/28/read-write-poem-2-food-of-sorts/#comment-272 I would have fenced all the guards of Venice for you Love that line ! <em>Thanks! -tom</em> I would have fenced all the guards of Venice for you

Love that line !

Thanks! -tom

]]> By: paisley http://fallenverses.org/2007/11/28/read-write-poem-2-food-of-sorts/comment-page-1/#comment-273 paisley Thu, 29 Nov 2007 11:44:50 +0000 http://fallenverses.org/2007/11/28/read-write-poem-2-food-of-sorts/#comment-273 well i am not sure i am taking away what you wanted me to take away... but i get the feeling that you are dealing with someone that can never be satisfied here.... <em>With the caveat that the "I" of the poem is not exactly me, this is as good an interpretation as any. :) -tom</em> well i am not sure i am taking away what you wanted me to take away… but i get the feeling that you are dealing with someone that can never be satisfied here….

With the caveat that the “I” of the poem is not exactly me, this is as good an interpretation as any. :) -tom

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