Totally Optional Evocation

Spring’s Dream

Flowers rained from the sky.
Sunlight waterfall of daisies.
Sweet kiss of rose petals
my crimson shroud.
Stricken from confession,
I lay prostrate, wasted.
And honeyed-dew
coated the iris as it fell.
Beauty is no elixir for the soul.
I weep. There are tears of lilies
mourning your departure,
fair company, indeed,
in your absence.


I made the deadline, anyway. You can go to Totally Optional Prompts to read more evocative poems.




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3 Comments so far


  1. tomachfive on November 8, 2007 11:51 pm

    Wonderful contrajuxtaposition of images! What a gift!

    Super-fast and super-nice! Many thanks! -tom

  2. Linda Jacobs on November 9, 2007 7:28 pm

    Beauty and pain. Life! Perfect! ~Linda

    Thanks! -tom

  3. Alan Bender on November 10, 2007 10:17 pm

    Worth the wait. ( ,)

    Thanks, Alan! -tom

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