Comments on: Totally Optional Prompts: Off the Wye River

By: Jessica

Jessica — Fri, 26 Oct 2007 01:58:56 +0000

gorgeous poem — a very well crafted.

By: gautami tripathy

gautami tripathy — Fri, 26 Oct 2007 01:54:55 +0000

What a perfect day! I enjoyed reading this

By: deb

deb — Fri, 26 Oct 2007 01:00:26 +0000

Lovely. Sweet breads means something different to me than I think you intended, though. I really like the last line.

Thank you. Yes, “sweetbread” all one word would not be particularly appetizing, but I didn’t even think of that until I saw your comment. -tom

By: Alan Bender

Alan Bender — Thu, 25 Oct 2007 23:23:56 +0000

So what is your opinion on TOP? I got a hint from the post title “Totally Optional Horse.” Is that the creature that would fall off the edge of a flat earth?

I think the totally optional horse is the one you’re not sure you on when you go galloping off the edge of a flat earth. I like TOP. Quite a bit. I think the use of poems gives a good base to jump off the flat earth from. I’ve also moved this comment from the “about tom” page, which I though I had disabled comments, to the post more relevant. -tom

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Thu, 25 Oct 2007 22:47:30 +0000

A perfect day. A perfect poem!

By: paisley

paisley — Thu, 25 Oct 2007 18:14:28 +0000

i agree with pauline,, that is the most perfect day imaginable….

By: Pauline

Pauline — Thu, 25 Oct 2007 14:15:18 +0000

a perfect day. I like the two wishes apiece and that you give yours to the world.

Thanks! -tom