Comments on: Totally Optional Prompts: Salt, Girl

By: gautami tripathy

gautami tripathy — Mon, 15 Oct 2007 16:03:45 +0000

This is sensuously salty. Sorry to reach here late but well worth it.

Thank you! I’m glad you made it over as well. -tom

By: Clare

Clare — Sun, 14 Oct 2007 18:35:21 +0000

Hi Tom! I really like the way you put words together and the
flow of them — especially the first 4 lines. This poem is
cool and saltily sexy too!

Thanks, Clare! -tom

By: wendy

wendy — Sat, 13 Oct 2007 22:42:10 +0000

A very specific memory…Like how my hair always looked different at the beach. A wildness, yes, a saltiness.

Passion is basic. Shown well here.

Thanks, Wendy! Personally, I can do without the beach-stuff, I sunburn too easily! -tom

By: Crafty Green Poet

Crafty Green Poet — Sat, 13 Oct 2007 20:47:53 +0000

I enjoyed reading this, especially the opening which is full of vivid imagery. I’ve glanced at the rest of your recent posts too and will come back soon to read them more carefully because they look really interesting.

Thanks, Juliet! I hope you enjoy anything you read, and always feel free to comment. -tom