Comments on: Poetry Thursday: An Ideal State

By: paisley

paisley — Sun, 07 Oct 2007 01:07:01 +0000

this was stellar.. the whole thing… just beautiful.. i am so happy if finally got over there to read it!!!!

Thanks for making it over! And for the kind comments. -tom

sbpoet — Thu, 04 Oct 2007 18:10:37 +0000

“one last light’

I seem to be caught by last lines today.

Hopefully the lines will throw you back instead of cooking you! -tom

Rambler — Thu, 04 Oct 2007 17:56:37 +0000

“to have our
sweat mingle
in rivulets
and our bodies blaze
like candles flames’
like the expressiveness of this piece a lot

Thanks! -tom