Comments on: Poetry Thursday: Walking Away http://fallenverses.org/2007/09/27/remembering-to-look-down-every-once-in-a-while/ Wed, 07 Jan 2009 20:57:57 +0000 hourly 1 By: Sara http://fallenverses.org/2007/09/27/remembering-to-look-down-every-once-in-a-while/comment-page-1/#comment-172 Sara Sun, 04 Nov 2007 21:06:33 +0000 http://tadam3000.wordpress.com/2007/09/27/remembering-to-look-down-every-once-in-a-while/#comment-172 Very vivid imagery. The first line is my favorite because you pack so much into three words. I still have not figured out how to do more with less in my work. Very vivid imagery. The first line is my favorite because you pack so much into three words. I still have not figured out how to do more with less in my work.

]]> By: deb http://fallenverses.org/2007/09/27/remembering-to-look-down-every-once-in-a-while/comment-page-1/#comment-168 deb Thu, 27 Sep 2007 20:43:38 +0000 http://tadam3000.wordpress.com/2007/09/27/remembering-to-look-down-every-once-in-a-while/#comment-168 The simplicity is just right The simplicity is just right

]]> By: Tumblewords http://fallenverses.org/2007/09/27/remembering-to-look-down-every-once-in-a-while/comment-page-1/#comment-171 Tumblewords Thu, 27 Sep 2007 18:07:18 +0000 http://tadam3000.wordpress.com/2007/09/27/remembering-to-look-down-every-once-in-a-while/#comment-171 Poignant, provocative and perfect! Love the color contrast and the words that take on new meaning with each reading. Poignant, provocative and perfect! Love the color contrast and the words that take on new meaning with each reading.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://fallenverses.org/2007/09/27/remembering-to-look-down-every-once-in-a-while/comment-page-1/#comment-170 gautami tripathy Thu, 27 Sep 2007 17:19:07 +0000 http://tadam3000.wordpress.com/2007/09/27/remembering-to-look-down-every-once-in-a-while/#comment-170 What a picture painted for so short a verse! Thanks! What a picture painted for so short a verse! Thanks!

]]> By: Rambler http://fallenverses.org/2007/09/27/remembering-to-look-down-every-once-in-a-while/comment-page-1/#comment-169 Rambler Thu, 27 Sep 2007 17:04:58 +0000 http://tadam3000.wordpress.com/2007/09/27/remembering-to-look-down-every-once-in-a-while/#comment-169 every time I read this I make something new out of it, excellent poetry trample discarded roses, what could be they... thousand leather shoes, who could be they every time I read this I make something new out of it,
excellent poetry

trample discarded roses, what could be they…
thousand leather shoes, who could be they

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