Poetry Thursday: Reincarnation: A Duo

Thursday, September 20th @ 10:56 am | Poem, Poetry, Poetry Thursday

Two from… somewhere…

Reincarnation: A Duo

1 Spirit’s View

death : transition
how many times
around
the wheel
until
I’m done

2 Top Hat’s View

Park Place – 6 – Baltic
how many times
around
the board
until
I win

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1 LJCohen on September 20, 2007 11:53 am
Nice juxtaposition–life as a monopoly game. I like!
2 Tumblewords on September 20, 2007 12:31 pm
Clever! The reference to Top Hat in Monopoly is nifty – I see it all…
3 coollikeme on September 20, 2007 2:18 pm
Cool and clever.
4 deb on September 20, 2007 2:47 pm
Terrific form for these thougths. Well done.
5 paisley on September 20, 2007 3:00 pm
very clever… and of course playful… excellent…..
6 polkadotwitch on September 21, 2007 9:43 am
mine usually says, “do not pass go. do not collect $200.” i’m talking both about monopoly AND reincarnation. this was fun! thank you for sharing it.
7 tom on September 23, 2007 10:48 pm
thanks, everyone, for reading. Ms. Polkadotwitch, I actually did plan to use something more like that, but opted for the stronger symmetry between the sections instead.