Two from… somewhere…
Reincarnation: A Duo
1 Spirit’s View
death : transition
how many times
around
the wheel
until
I’m done
2 Top Hat’s View
Park Place – 6 – Baltic
how many times
around
the board
until
I win
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Nice juxtaposition–life as a monopoly game. I like!
Clever! The reference to Top Hat in Monopoly is nifty - I see it all…
Cool and clever.
Terrific form for these thougths. Well done.
very clever… and of course playful… excellent…..
mine usually says, “do not pass go. do not collect $200.” i’m talking both about monopoly AND reincarnation. this was fun! thank you for sharing it.
thanks, everyone, for reading. Ms. Polkadotwitch, I actually did plan to use something more like that, but opted for the stronger symmetry between the sections instead.