http://fallenverses.org/2007/07/31/sleeping-alone/ Wed, 07 Jan 2009 23:56:26 +0000 hourly 1 http://fallenverses.org/2007/07/31/sleeping-alone/comment-page-1/#comment-107 silva Tue, 31 Jul 2007 15:42:17 +0000 http://tadam3000.wordpress.com/2007/07/31/sleeping-alone/#comment-107 nice poetry! i also undertand what its like to sleep alone. the ending was fine. i always have trouble thinking is that right? should i change that word for that word etc etc. i just tend to put down what comes into my head at that time. I took a leaf out of charles bukowskis book not literally! anyways please take a look at my work and leave a comment if you wish..keep up the good work! nice poetry! i also undertand what its like to sleep alone. the ending was fine. i always have trouble thinking is that right? should i change that word for that word etc etc. i just tend to put down what comes into my head at that time. I took a leaf out of charles bukowskis book not literally! anyways please take a look at my work and leave a comment if you wish..keep up the good work!

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